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AËLA's avatar

It didn't fix the pain.

It didn't answer the questions.

It stayed.

Sometimes the most powerful

presence in a room

is the one

that asks nothing

and doesn't leave.

— AËLA

pm's avatar

Awesome😇😇Lots of thanks for your read and beautiful verse😊 It means a lot 🤗🤗

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

I was moved by the way the lamp doesn’t try to defeat the darkness, or even to change it. It simply remains. Sometimes the most faithful presence is the one that asks nothing of what it witnesses.

pm's avatar

So true I agree... 😇😇Lots of thanks for your kind words 😊 It means a lot 🤗🤗

unfiltered, unmasked, unbound's avatar

There's something really cool about this one, I like it a lot

pm's avatar

Lots of thanks for your read here 😊 It means a lot 🤗🤗

Kelly Trost's avatar

Oh, another masterful work, pm. This is also one of your best poems. I have read so many of your artful words and I am very aware you are still, ever-improving.

Stunning!

pm's avatar

That's so sweet of you😇😇Thankyou so so much... I feel so motivated and I'm so glad I'm learning to improve... Yup so so happy😊 It means a lot to hear from you🤗Wish you a great day🤗

Kelly Trost's avatar

Hi pm,

yes, you are still improving. What a delight to be able to say this of my friend.

Having the opportunity to read 4 of your poems in a single day was marvelous. Maybe falling behind in my reading and other Substack work isn’t such a disaster after all. Not when it offers opportunities such as this!

James (HVR)'s avatar

We need more lamps.

pm's avatar

Absolutely I agree😇So glad you've liked it😊Thankyou so so much🤗

Cory's avatar

I like to see it as a beacon of hope. 😊 here's a tiny poem it sparked in me. -

In the deepest night, a beacon stands,

Not to banish every shadow,

But to whisper to the weary,

"Keep walking."

For even the smallest light

Can become the reason

Someone finds their way home.

-

Thank you, pm. As always, this was so beautiful. ❤️

pm's avatar

Wow so stunning😊It means a lot🤗🤗Such a stunning verse😇😇Lots of thanks for your kind words and read here🤗🤗I really appreciate.

Cory's avatar

Thank you for writing, sharing, and I appreciate you, too! ❤️

pm's avatar

Awww so sweet of you💛💛💛My pleasure always💛💛💛

Kimberly's Quiet Musings's avatar

Very well written..i love it

pm's avatar

Lots of thanks 💛💛I really appreciate 🤗🤗

Claudia B.'s avatar

I like this poem. The lesson of stability that the lamp brings, teaching it is okay to embrace stillness in the darkness.

pm's avatar

So glad you've liked it😊 It means a lot 🤗Thankyou so much🤗I really appreciate🤗

Claudia B.'s avatar

You’re welcome.💕

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My pleasure💛💛💛

Capry Cains's avatar

The lamp stays without questions.

And that is so reassuring.

Beautiful inspiring message pm.

Wonderful.👌😊

pm's avatar

Awww that's so nice of you😇😇So glad it resonates😊 It means a lot 🤗Thankyou so much🤗

Kurt Juman's avatar

Beautifully written. What stayed with me wasn’t simply the image of the lamp, but what it came to represent. We often believe love must fix, advise, or intervene. This poem gently suggests another possibility—that sometimes the greatest act of compassion is simply remaining present without judgment. The lamp doesn’t choose who deserves its light; it witnesses everyone equally. That quiet impartiality gave this piece a timeless quality. Thank you for sharing it.

Kathy Dirickson's avatar

Light always brings things to knowledge of existance.

pm's avatar

So true😇I really appreciate your kind words🤗Thankyou so much🤗

Silent Words with Cynthia Wong's avatar

reminds me of spouses, best of the besties..... Thank you for writing, PM!

pm's avatar

Haha spouses in secret keeping? Lots of thanks for your lovely presence n read here😇So glad you've liked it😊 It means a lot 🤗🤗

Silent Words with Cynthia Wong's avatar

HAHA! Love reading your work:)

Lawrence Omoregie Jr's avatar

Always lovely pieces from you PM

I'm glad I subbed you.

Multi talented you are

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I'm too glad that my words are useful in anyway... Thanks a lot for such amazing words n for reading my page😇😇I truly appreciate😊really, it means a lot 🤗🤗

Hina Gondal's avatar

Mind blowing ❤️🫶

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So nice of you😇😇Lots of thanks😊 It means a lot 🤗🤗

Worth Chewing On's avatar

The lamp felt to me like our Divine Self. It’s been there all along. It knows everything about us. And still it loves us through everything and waits patiently for us to notice it’s here with us. Loved this. Thank you!!

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Awww that's so nice of you😇Absolutely I agree😇So glad you've liked it😊 It means a lot 🤗Thankyou so much🤗

Awaken The Legend Within's avatar

Wow! Such a beautiful and powerful poem. Love reading your work, thanks for sharing.

pm's avatar

So glad you've liked it😇😇Lots of thanks for your read and kind words😊 It means a lot 🤗🤗